foblin
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Living In Sin
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Post by foblin on Jan 1, 2006 17:31:07 GMT -5
Are we pure? I'm not quite sure. Does our innocence die Or was it never born? Can we wash away our sin As we do our dirt? Or do we just wait Until a blessing save us again?
I wrote this quite a while ago.
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Post by starryeyes on Jan 12, 2006 20:09:31 GMT -5
A bit raw, but full of feeling. Your other poems have come a long way, I can tell.
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foblin
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Living In Sin
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Post by foblin on Jan 13, 2006 14:06:42 GMT -5
Yeah.. I only posted it through boredom.
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