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[starryeyes]

I'll write the next part and post it later..


I glanced over at the boy with the dusty blonde hair, as his friend leaned inches away from my lips. His pale blue eyes bore into mine for one final glance before I looked away and gently brushed my lips against the boy’s in front of me. His breath was hot on my neck as we parted…and I knew I had sealed my fate with that kiss.

One month earlier…

I struggled to keep my short skirt from flying up against the wind as I trotted up to meet my friends outside the movie theater. It was a rainy, windy day in September… yet the air was warm.
Ray, Alan and Chet were hanging around, typical teenager style (hands in pockets, slouched over, sexy pouts,) waiting for me.
When I reached them Ray greeted me with a “Where’s Brianna?”
I was about to open my mouth when Alan snapped “Jeez Ray, I thought you hated her after she cheated on you and then dumped you. Why are you always asking about her?”
“She couldn’t get a ride.” I said, ignoring Alan’s comment.
“So what do you want to see?” Questioned Chet trying to smooth down his hair – a useless attempt.
“I want to see Into The Blue,” stated Ray, finding his voice again, “Hot chicks in Bikini’s!” He flashed a big grin.
“It’s too late for that” I rolled my eyes, “How about Serenity?”
“Sounds good.” agreed Alan and Chet.
We entered the huge theatre to the sound of arcade games, the smell of popcorn, and many little kids running around and screaming.
“I’ll get the tickets.” I offered and hurried over to the ticket desk.
“Are you fourteen years of age?” Asked a bored looking employee.
I flicked my hair, “Of course.” I lied.
He printed the tickets and I snatched them with a smile.
“Got them, guys!” I called out to the guys, who were buying a bucket of popcorn and a giant drink each.
I quickly bought a frozen yogurt and licked the melting contents, that were spilling over the sides, as we made our way to find some seats.
We sat down in the middle of the theatre and waited through the previews, talking loudly.
I smiled and leaned closer to Alan, who was on my left. Suddenly, Alan leaned away as Ray came and sat down on my other side.
“Hey Guys, You left me alone!!” Chet called out once he realized he had been deserted and was sitting by himself.
Alan sat up straight, and this time Ray was the one who leaned closer to me… I could hear his deep breathing and see his muscular profile in the dark. 'He looks good', I thought.
“What are you staring at?” He questioned jokingly, making the movie just noise in the background “Can’t get enough of my hot style, can you?”
“Of course.” I rolled my eyes and crossed my legs, staring at the movie screen once more.
The movie itself wasn’t that good, but I found myself being lost in the plot anyways, trying to ignore Alan and Ray who were talking around me.
“Shut up!” I hissed.
“Make me.” Grinned Ray and he squeezed my leg very hard, just above the knee.
“Owwwwwww” I complained, “That hurt.” And I punched him in the stomach.

“You can’t penetrate my abs of steel,“ He said, only half joking.
“Whatever.” I shut up and leaned closer to him when a frightening fighting scene came on…

[lostsoul]

I like your story so far...keep it up. Can't wait to read the rest of it. ;D

[starryeyes]

Thanks..
I'll post more later.

[foblin]

I'm loving it!!! I hope you post the next part soon =) I can't wait.

[starryeyes]

Thanks Eve, in case you haven't guessed, it's about (you know who)

The next day was a school day. I was still tired from the night before, but I cared a lot about my appearance and got up early to do my makeup. All the while I was thinking about Ray, how close he had leaned to me, how he had talked in that thrilling whisper and his gorgeous hair.
I also thought about Alan, who was much shorter and had more brilliant, beautiful blue eyes.
At the bus stop I had my usual argument with Mark about how Green Day were much better than Bon Jovi, and how showering once a week did not count as being clean.
Mark stuck up the middle finger at me just as the bus drove up.
“Shove it up your ass.” I whispered to him with a venomous smirk, as he put his tattered headphones back on.

On the bus Ray sat across the aisle from me with Alan. We sat in the last seats, so I passed all the annoying little kids when I got on the bus. When I saw Ray my heart did a little flutter, and at the same moment his and Alan’s eyes lit up.
I sat down just as the bus moved on to the next stop, where my friend Brianna came on and sat with me. Ray immediately buried his nose in a book, which was upsidown.
“Hi Alan, hey Chloe!” she greeted us cheerfully.
She greeted Ray with a “Hey Dirtbag” and a sneer.
“Why do you hate me so much??!” he complained, looking up from the book, “I mean, you cheated on me!! I don’t understand you!”
As much as I didn’t want to hurt Ray (and I actually agreed with him,) Brianna was one of my best friends.
So, I put on my best fake sneer “Maybe because you look like a pile of shit. And you always insult her first!”
Alan grinned. “She’s got you there, Ray.”
Brianna smiled at me. Ray looked unbelievably hurt, and gave me a reproachful puppy- dog look that melted my heart.
At recess that day I hung out with Alan, Ray, Sandy, Cole and Melanie. Cole kept hitting on me and Sandy and we flirted just as much back. Ray teased “Hey Cole, Chloe and Sandy like youuu! Why don’t you go out with Cole, Chloe?”
I gave him a dirty look. “Because I like someone else, ok?”
“Who?” demanded Ray.
“No one cares Ray!” exclaimed Melanie, “just shut up.”
But Ray kept harassing me all day, offering names, teasing, bribing.
Finally, at the end of the day ,I looked him in the eye. “Do you really want to know?”
“Duh.” He said.
“Then you tell me who you like first.”
He looked at the ground, then stared me in the eye.
“You.”
“I don’t believe it.” I said, hoping it to be true with all my heart.
“Come on, why do you think I flirted with you so much at the movies? I really like you, ok?”
I was still doubtful.” I don’t know…”
“Fuck.” He looked really pissed and hurt, “I don’t have time for this. You’ve lost your chance.”


Those words made my heart feel like ice. They were all too familiar.
I grabbed his arm.
“No, wait, please. I like you too okay. I always have, ever since the day after I said no to being your girlfriend last year. Do you know what that was like? Having to live with the fact that I had a chance and lost it?” The words had come out so quickly, it was like a door had opened and was letting all my emotions out.
He looked sort of shocked, but there was also a knowing look in his eyes...

[lostsoul]

Thats a great story so far. Hope to read more soon... ;D

[starryeyes]

:-*Thanks... I'm surprised people like it..
it's sorta a randomn story lol.

[Graveyard Goddess]

oh i love it! post more!
is it about you?
also...why cant you see a movie when your 14? sorry im just curious

[foblin]

Woooo Chloe!! It's awesome! Acctually rather gripping =p the more I read the more I want to read.

[starryeyes]

admin said:

oh i love it! post more!
is it about you?
also...why cant you see a movie when your 14? sorry im just curious

Yes it is.. sorta.
And i couldn't get into the movie unless i said i was 14, cause it was rated 14a.

[starryeyes]

I didn’t speak to him again for the rest of the day and on the bus I was too busy talking to Brianna about our homework that we didn’t even make eye contact.
Brianna got off before me, and in the short ride over to my stop there was an awkward silence.
“See you tomorrow” I said, without a backward glance at Ray and Alan, I exited the bus with a sigh.

That night I anxiously waited for any message, call or word from Ray. I wondered if he really liked me or if he was just saying it to get me to admit I liked him. I didn’t know what to think, my mind was filled with so many questions.
I tried calling Melanie, but she didn’t pick up the phone. I tried going on my msn to talk to Evelynn, but she wasn’t online. My only hope was to turn on the T.V. and waste my night away.

The next morning I awoke with butterflies in my stomach, even more than I would get before a soccer match or basketball tournament. It was amazing how a boy could make me feel that way. It was pathetic, in a way.
I chose my clothes carefully. A red tank top with a black zip-up sweater overtop, jeans, a studded belt, and a slash of black eyeliner.
I was shaky as I boarded the bus. As I approached the back, Ray nodded and Alan stretched, letting out a loud yawn. ‘Same as usual’ I thought.
I smiled and immediately Alan started describing what he did after school the previous afternoon.
“It was awesome,” He was saying, “I did this kick-ass jump with my bike. I completely totaled it, though.” He added.
“This kid’s an idiot,” Ray stated, pointing at Alan “He destroyed his new bike the first day he got it.”
I giggled and agreed with Ray. Alan just grinned sheepishly.
Things definitely are normal I concluded, and relaxed slightly in my seat.

[lostsoul]

Keep the story coming, girl!! It's really good. ;D ;D

[foblin]

Woooo! Carry on posting Chloe, it's coming on great =)

I like the way your making us wait for the next bit =P

[starryeyes]

Thanks guys, I'm glad you like it!

I fidgeted all through class that day, staring at the back of Ray’s head; trying to will him to turn around and talk to me.
Halfway through the day I got my wish. Ray casually yawned and stretched, letting his hands fall on my desk. Enclosed in one of them was a tiny (and I mean TINY,) little strip of paper, which he let fall into my palm.
With trembling hands I turned over the note…

“Will you go out with me?”

I couldn’t help being delightedly surprised, even though I knew that it would be coming.
I smiled and scribbled an “Ok <3” on the other side of the paper.
This time I reached under my desk and nudged his leg. He slowly reached back and I put it in his hand. He read the answer and quietly went back to work.
When he got up to go to the washroom, he looked back at me and I smiled and bit my lip.

That afternoon we had to deal with telling Brianna.
As soon as she got on the bus I asked if she could sit with Alan.
She said No, but I kept asking until she turned to me with a smile and mouthed Does he like me?
“No,” I said and took a deep breath, “I’m going out with Ray.”
She looked absolutely stunned, and sort of collapsed in Alan’s seat.
“No.” she said disbelievingly, as Ray came and sat with me; snaking his arm around my waist.
“When did this happen?”
“Not to long ago,” Ray smiled, “Today actually.”
“But..but…he’s a dirtbag loser.”
I blushed and leaned on Ray. “Well, I like him.”

As soon as I got him the phone rang, and I jumped to grab it.
“Hello?”
“Oh my god!!! How could you? You can do much better!! I mean, RAY?! ” ...

[crazystrange]

very cool story, i love it because its down to earth but enjoyable to read at the same time can't wait to read more!!!