Post by lostsoul on Nov 21, 2005 14:04:57 GMT -5
So, I thought to give this another try. I'm not very good at writting poems so if anyone can help make this a better poem, I would appreciate it very much.
These mystical creatures of the night,
preying on the blood of mortals,
Their charm, almost impossible to ignore,
attracts their unknowing victims,
Once in the arms of the vampire,
Almost impossible to escape,
leaving the victim helpless,
yet, somewhat in a trace,
The victim not knowing the dangers lureing,
the vampire bites,
drinking up their sweet blood,
until they slowly die
in the arms of the immortal.
So, what do you think? Should I totally give up on writting poems?lol
These mystical creatures of the night,
preying on the blood of mortals,
Their charm, almost impossible to ignore,
attracts their unknowing victims,
Once in the arms of the vampire,
Almost impossible to escape,
leaving the victim helpless,
yet, somewhat in a trace,
The victim not knowing the dangers lureing,
the vampire bites,
drinking up their sweet blood,
until they slowly die
in the arms of the immortal.
So, what do you think? Should I totally give up on writting poems?lol
