crazystrange
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Denial is the best way out!
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Post by crazystrange on Nov 12, 2005 16:43:40 GMT -5
She chose to walk alone Though others wondered why Refused to look before her, Kept eyes cast upwards, Towards the sky.
She didn't have companions No need for earthly things. Only wanted freedom, From what she felt were Puppet strings.
She longed to be a bird. That she might fly away. She pitied every blade of grass For planted they would stay.
She longed to be a flame, That brightly danced alone. Felt jealous of the steam That made the air its only h-ome.
Some say she wished too hard. Some say she wished too long. But we awoke one autumn day To find that she was gone.
The trees, they say stood witness. The sky refused to tell. But someone who had seen it said the story played out well.
She spread her arms out wide. Breathed in the break of dawn. She just let go of all she held...
And then she was gone.
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foblin
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Living In Sin
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Post by foblin on Nov 12, 2005 16:55:34 GMT -5
Oh My God! That's Beautiful
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hellskitty
Chillin in the morgue
"you are so transparent, cant see your own reflection..."
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Post by hellskitty on Nov 12, 2005 17:46:37 GMT -5
wow! thats really beautiful
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Post by lostsoul on Nov 12, 2005 19:24:56 GMT -5
That is a really good poem! i love it! ;D ;D
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Post by Graveyard Goddess on Nov 13, 2005 7:10:50 GMT -5
I love it dearly. keep posting your writing plese!
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crazystrange
Post-Mortem Mod
Denial is the best way out!
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Post by crazystrange on Nov 13, 2005 9:27:26 GMT -5
actually i didn't write it, i heard it on an episode of 'as told by ginger' on nicktoons!! but i love it!
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