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Post by lostsoul on Oct 1, 2005 11:24:46 GMT -5
I wrote this a few years ago. Let's see what everyone thinks of it....
It was he who stole her heart, It was not easy, but he never gave up, Now she belongs to him, he won't let her go, He loves her dearly, will do anything to keep her.
It was she who let him into her heart, she finally gave in, to his sweet loving, Now she's with him, she's floating on cloud 9, She loves him dearly, will do anything to keep him.
They love each other dearly, the spark is there, Love is in the air for them both, Will it be there 'till the end of eternity? Time will only tell.
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Post by Graveyard Goddess on Oct 1, 2005 14:18:21 GMT -5
I love it lots! its got a lovely flow....and thanks by the way for posting it...we could use some variety in this room....not only teen depression! (which is of course is contributed by me lol whoops) I love this
"He loves her dearly, will do anything to keep her."
"She loves him dearly, will do anything to keep him"
"They love each other dearly, the spark is there,"
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Post by lostsoul on Oct 1, 2005 14:50:51 GMT -5
Thank you ooh so much!
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Post by starryeyes on Oct 2, 2005 10:09:29 GMT -5
Very Nice.. I Like It
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