crimsoncadavers [amanda]
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I am the Lilith. I am everything you dream of when you sleep. I am your nightmares I am your fantasy
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Post by crimsoncadavers [amanda] on Sept 7, 2005 13:50:48 GMT -5
she used to feel like the world was perfect... that she was made for this.. she was ment to be here. ... there was never a grey cloud in the sky. she was beautiful... he made her feel like a goddess.the world made perfect sense to the girl. she felt warm inside, she felt amazingeverything fit... it's falling apart now she sits on the bathroom floor, struggling to remember what it felt like to feel. staining the floor with her blood. flooding the room with her weak crys and hollow sobbing. slicing at the skin they once called perfect. clawing at the face they once called beautiful.
she wanted the fading scars to slice open. she wanted the world to forget her. since it seemed like that was happening all along. she was one of the forgotten, a blip in the radar, a skip in the song they listened to the moments they spent together she was nothing.
She sliced and sliced and it wasn't enough. it will never be enough. and now my hips show that i cannot feel. I don't know how to feel.
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Post by Graveyard Goddess on Sept 10, 2005 9:59:16 GMT -5
amanda that is amazing....your an amazing writer...its just...so....real. theres so much emotion. i love it. i love how it makes me feel the agony it was written with. you are a great writer
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Post by starryeyes on Sept 19, 2005 14:27:03 GMT -5
It was really really emotional.. brilliantly written
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Post by forgottenshadow on Sept 27, 2005 2:17:27 GMT -5
That is amazing. It's so emotional. There so much pain and agony in the end. but it's so happy in the beginning. It's beautiful
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crimsoncadavers [amanda]
Post-Mortem Mod
I am the Lilith. I am everything you dream of when you sleep. I am your nightmares I am your fantasy
Posts: 97
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Post by crimsoncadavers [amanda] on Sept 28, 2005 18:19:07 GMT -5
Im glad you guys like my writting.
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