autumnnocturn3
Fresh Blood
i am a fountain of blood, in the shape of a girl.
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Post by autumnnocturn3 on Oct 11, 2005 13:51:55 GMT -5
With This Ring, I Behead (end of U.) written mid-summer.
my heart no longer skips a beat when i think of losing you, and i am not brought to a trench where my darkest thoughts retreat to. i always mused you were oblivious to my pain, but you always knew, and for years i tried to relive happy memories, but there were so few. remember that song we sang to the boys, entitled "blue"? i cling to that being the only thing about us, that was true. this is me. getting over... you.
boo-fuckin'-hooooooo.
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foblin
Post-Mortem Mod
Living In Sin
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Post by foblin on Oct 11, 2005 13:59:33 GMT -5
That's awesome, I really like it!!!
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Post by starryeyes on Oct 11, 2005 14:16:49 GMT -5
Full Of Vengance..
It's Full Of Feeling And I Love It.
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Post by lostsoul on Oct 12, 2005 9:49:31 GMT -5
I love that poem! It's really good.
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autumnnocturn3
Fresh Blood
i am a fountain of blood, in the shape of a girl.
Posts: 10
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Post by autumnnocturn3 on Oct 13, 2005 12:30:19 GMT -5
... thanks, everyone that offered their thoughts on With This Ring. it took me three tough years to gain such a mind set, and seven simple lines to convey it.
again, thank you!
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lanaia74
Chillin in the morgue
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Post by lanaia74 on Dec 16, 2007 6:30:48 GMT -5
Very original and creative and very well done!
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