Post by foblin on Oct 1, 2005 15:58:35 GMT -5
I made this poem up in a very boring German lesson, so VERY open to constructive critisism.
No More Soul,
No Mirror Image;
No Life Long Goal,
No Passing of age,
Not Life Nor Death,
The In-between mesh.
Forever Cursed,
To Feel The Pain;
Nothing Worse,
Ever Again;
Take A Life, Keep the undead;
Taste the blood to stay ahead.
Heart of evil,
Wings of a bat,
Side with the devil,
Immortal track,
A need to feed, with Gleaming fangs,
Beautiful evil; Vampire gangs.
No More Soul,
No Mirror Image;
No Life Long Goal,
No Passing of age,
Not Life Nor Death,
The In-between mesh.
Forever Cursed,
To Feel The Pain;
Nothing Worse,
Ever Again;
Take A Life, Keep the undead;
Taste the blood to stay ahead.
Heart of evil,
Wings of a bat,
Side with the devil,
Immortal track,
A need to feed, with Gleaming fangs,
Beautiful evil; Vampire gangs.
