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Post by starryeyes on Jun 5, 2005 20:05:10 GMT -5
post your short poems here.
In The End
sweet misery,
sweet release,
is bitter when you pretend.
sweet victory,
sweet love,
is bitter without a friend.
all things sweet
are bitter in the end.
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Post by Graveyard Goddess on Jun 5, 2005 21:22:02 GMT -5
Love it chloe!
I write very few short poems...let me have a look for one....um this i think may be my shortest one, so itll haveta do!
The Runaway
The parasite is flowering tight, around my veins
It’s devouring the thing within,
which seems to keep me sane.
See the puzzle’s missing pieces,
so you make another mark
but it never seems to go away.
It never really leaves your heart.
Spider scurries across the floor,
I couldn’t catch it if I tried.
Poison fills the world, as the time fly’s by.
It stares at me like I’m insane,
so I let it go, just let it flow
And watch it drip down through the drain
There’s no cure for the runaway.
There’s no cure for the runaway's pain.
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foblin
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Post by foblin on Jun 6, 2005 12:26:08 GMT -5
Awesome poems ;D
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Post by starryeyes on Jun 6, 2005 14:32:17 GMT -5
wow. your poem is really good... like i said, i am an amateur but yours is so much better  |
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Post by Graveyard Goddess on Jun 6, 2005 19:18:26 GMT -5
No way chick. take that back. your a great writer! i suck asss
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foblin
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Post by foblin on Jun 7, 2005 11:43:10 GMT -5
You both make me emmbarassed enough not to post anything.  |
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Post by starryeyes on Jun 7, 2005 11:45:55 GMT -5
Awww that's sweet you guys, but you should post eve!! i'm sure your poems are really good  |
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