Freyjå
Necrotic Newbie
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Post by Freyjå on Jul 31, 2005 8:44:04 GMT -5
KABOOM! The world has ended A barren sphere of death. Incinerated corpses litter the surface, Dust clouds look in the sky The chances of survival are six billion to one. Everyone should be dead. Yet one person remains… The force of the blast has mutilated his body, His face has burnt off, An oozing red mess in its place. One leg is destroyed beyond recognition Forcing him to crawl on his hands. Could this man save humankind? The smell of flesh entrances him. He crawls over to a rotting carcass, Excited by the sight and scent. His penis protrudes in front of him In all its ten inch glory. He gently prods the fleshy cavities Before mounting the decomposing corpse. A filthy act of necrophilia… One thrust, two thrusts, three… The head of the corpse falls off. He continues to pump furiously Making roars of intense pleasure. Climax starts to near, Pumping faster and faster. Semen spills from his penis, Pleasure overpowers his body His yelps of satisfaction fill the silence. He dismounts slowly, Enjoying the soft grip of flesh. But what has happened? His penis is inflamed and sore. The inflammation starts to spread, Soon it has reached his head. A necrophilia-transmitted-disease; Thrush mutated through radiation Slowly disintegrating his skin. Flesh starts to crumble away, His innards slowly falling apart. He is dead. All life is gone. Congratulations, Humanity.
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lanaia74
Chillin in the morgue
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Post by lanaia74 on Aug 7, 2007 4:07:37 GMT -5
VERY well done!
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Leash
Necrotic Newbie
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Post by Leash on Aug 8, 2007 13:19:47 GMT -5
Disgusting. You did a good job describing the scents, visuals, etc. My senses need a break now.
Although, it read more as a story than a poem for me..
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Post by Graveyard Goddess on Aug 8, 2007 16:38:52 GMT -5
i love it. disgusting is a good discription. not bad disgusting,, but talented that you can create the feeling of it
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