foblin
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Living In Sin
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Post by foblin on Aug 22, 2005 14:12:37 GMT -5
I don't smile to hide my pain
Because when I'm happy it's gone again.
I smile because I'm happy;
I smile because I'm free;
I smile for my past,
My happy Memories.
We don't smile to hide our pain
Because when we smile it's gone again.
We smile for our honesty;
We smile for our love;
We smile because we're pure,
Innocent like a dove.
*one would appreciate any constructive critisism*
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Post by starryeyes on Aug 22, 2005 17:09:28 GMT -5
It's good... not much to fix.... I'd love to hear more. It would be good if it was longer, but it's also still great the way it is. Me likey!!
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Post by Graveyard Goddess on Aug 22, 2005 20:34:58 GMT -5
its brilliant evie....it would make a good acoustic actually  |
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foblin
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Living In Sin
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Post by foblin on Aug 23, 2005 7:14:56 GMT -5
Thankies ;D
Chloe ~ I would've liked to have made it longer, but I didn't want it to turn into a mess because I was just using words to fill it up =)
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