A Rose Is Born (poem)

[foblin]

I'm not sure when I wrote this, but here it is.

A Rose Is Born
She looked into the mirror,
What are we today?
A rose is born
Just to waste away.
Is that the fate
Of everyday?
As our makeup runs
Our hearts are torn and frayed;
For love and trust,
The price we've paid.

She looked into the mirror,
She doesn't love me anymore,
Shattered pieces of my soul
Are falling to the floor.
But when all beauty disappears
Again a rose is born.
Princess for a day,
We forget our lives before,
But once we get on top
We tumble down once more.




constructive critisism welcome =]

[Graveyard Goddess]

I LOVE it eve. its great! it would make a wonderful song too you know

[vampyre]

I agree. Very poetic

[foblin]

thanks

[livingdeaddolls]

i really like this poem its really good please keep writing so i can read more tehehee hehe ! mwaH xx