Being In Love With You

[foblin]

I'll close my eyes for this,
I only want to feel you,
Your kiss upon my lips;
Our souls entwined
For forever of a moment.
Finally I can find
A part of myself I had lost.
Revived by you
It flutters like a butterfly,
Ever so softly,
Attracted to the light
Shining from your aura.
A true happiness
I feel deep inside
Fills my heart
Unlike anything in this life.





constructive critisism welcomed. started out with some kind of rhyme then lost it lol.

[crazystrange]

that's a beautiful poem

[livingdeaddolls]

awh i love it! so much desription, and heart felt thought put into it.

[foblin]

Thanks guys =] i wanted it to rhyme lol but I just couldn't get my feelings into it. and I wanted more for this poem to show how I feel.