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Post by Graveyard Goddess on Dec 14, 2006 20:28:35 GMT -5
Soul come with me
And try to be
brave inside
No angels live
Beyond the gate
Sacrifice may keep you alive
What will set you free
When you’ve looked Death in the eye
Innocence is lost when you are scared inside
Pain that could be God in disguise,
A young soul Dances beneath the gallows
Dead eyes shine, Still looking so alive
Innocence dies.
When you are Terrified.
They say, “how could it be?”
The strangers cry
At a tragedy
And hope is gone,
When no one Is there to save you
A pain that could be God in disguise.
Innocence does not exist
When you’re left alone to die
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Post by livingdeaddolls on Dec 19, 2006 9:34:38 GMT -5
that is realllly good! wat inspiried you to write like that....
if you dont mind me asking...
its really amazing i wish to write stuff like that...but these days ive been having like writers block and cant think of anything...
ooxoxo wbss\!!
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Post by Graveyard Goddess on Dec 19, 2006 19:37:22 GMT -5
actually this one is the only poem ive ever wrote, after reading a scene from a book. most of my poems are based on me my life, or nature or things i see personally. this one was inspired by Eli Weisel's Night...the part with the sad eyed angel
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Post by foblin on Dec 20, 2006 15:44:20 GMT -5
I love it stephie!!! Your writing is so deep and beautiful, i wish I could write like you.
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Post by Graveyard Goddess on Dec 21, 2006 21:29:16 GMT -5
*blush* thank you eve....you can though! your poems are AMAZNIG
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Post by vampyre on Dec 22, 2006 3:55:41 GMT -5
Very good Goddess  |
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