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Post by vampyre on Dec 22, 2006 4:11:38 GMT -5
I wrote this a few years ago. It was about someone I thought I was very much in love with but for various reasons it never worked out. But anyway, hope you like it.
Create Something Wonderful
Verse 1) I’ve been thinking of you and I, And the size of the task ahead. All we can do is try, This has already been said.
Verse 2) We’re both old enough, To know what we feel. Yes it’ll be tough, But it can be real.
Chorus) We both know what we’re doing, We both know love’s there to find. We both know we need happiness, We both know to take our time. We can create something wonderful, We can create something beautiful. And we will make things happen, Together…..
Verse 3) I’ve been dreaming of you and me, All the things we must say. So much I want to do, Want nothing in the way.
Verse 4) Now we both realise, How hard it will be. Looking in your eyes, Yes this is for me.
Repeat Chorus
Bridge) Something wonderful, Something rare. Something special, How I care. Something beautiful, Something true. Something incredible, I love you.
Repeat Chorus
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foblin
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Living In Sin
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Post by foblin on Dec 22, 2006 11:50:17 GMT -5
This song shows what you felt. and has a great rhyme scheme =] Love that part. What it says is how it feels. keep showing us your writing.
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Post by vampyre on Dec 22, 2006 16:38:27 GMT -5
thanks my Scarling friend
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Post by crazystrange on Jan 25, 2007 17:04:36 GMT -5
:-*LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!
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Post by Graveyard Goddess on Jan 25, 2007 21:40:39 GMT -5
its absolutley beautiful vampyre
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