foblin
Post-Mortem Mod
Living In Sin
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Post by foblin on Jan 10, 2007 13:41:00 GMT -5
This is so new to me, It feels so bad It makes me laugh. Then I remember It's familiarity, This Is how I used to be.
It still stings Like it did back then; Makes old scars open again. But the arrow Hits deeper still, It's been aimed to kill.
And I find myself Thinking the same thoughts I'm not strong enough to support. Now square one Has come around again, A comfortable sleep With a familiar pain.
open to constructive critisism
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Post by starryeyes on Jan 11, 2007 21:19:23 GMT -5
i loved the last two lines.
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lanaia74
Chillin in the morgue
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Post by lanaia74 on Sept 2, 2007 4:45:53 GMT -5
Very original and creative and very well done!
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