Newwww Poem

[foblin]

it's a bit. crap lol. i've not written in a long time and i'm trying to get back into it so bear with me :]


I think you're beautiful,
But you just can't see
You deserve so much more,
Yet you've settled for me.
And I want to show the world
Why I fell in love with you,
But the tragedy is
They'll Fall in love too.
So take hold of my hand
And I'll never let go
Cause you mean more to me
Than you'll ever know.

[crazystrange]

aw i love it! it sounds slightly paranoid yet sweet and trustworthing. very cool!

[foblin]

Thanks :] xXx

[vampyre]

There is absolutely nothing wrong with it at all Foblin !

It's sweet and to the point

[lanaia74]

Very original and creative and very well done!