Grasp My Hand

[lanaia74]

Grasp my hand, letting me take you beyond hurt and pain
Don't you hear me knocking on the door? You better open it and let me in
By doing that one thing, ecstasy and happiness, from which you will never want to refrain
You having everything you have always wanted, in every situation, you will win.

All the fame and fortune, you could ever wish for
All this yours for taking, no questions asked
The taste of the good things, a thirst only wanting more
All this, I offer to you, grasp my hand, in ecstasy and riches you will forever bask.

Just think of everything you can do, the glory and the riches
Forever being yours in this life, just take hold and grasp my hand
I promise you happiness and riches, all yours, and not a hitch
If you wanted, I could make you the ruler of a land.

You know you want to trust me, just grasp my hand
You say you have questions, well just ask away
I will console your fears, come on give me your hand
I will show you a life of pleasure, one which I promise, you will never sway.

No sickness, no pain, there will be nothing to worry about
A life of total bliss, of total gain
There will never be any reason for you to doubt
Here in this life, you shall always want to remain.

So don't be shy, just grasp my hand, I will show you the way
Follow me and I promise you will achieve, ever goal
Your wishes always coming true, without delay
I only ask one thing, in return, you give me your soul.

[Graveyard Goddess]

like always youre poems are amazing, they make ours look like dr suess. not only is youre rhyme scheme flow so well, its got just enough content, to make you ponder and enjoy readng at the same time.i really love this. if you want any critisism let me know (not that i have any at this point...i usually have to think about poems and re-read them to find critisism anyhow)

[lanaia74]

Thank you Goddess! You flatter me!

[vampyre]

lovely piece of writing. Well done