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Post by Graveyard Goddess on Nov 6, 2007 16:38:56 GMT -5
I decided to have a go at writing becuase ive lacked inspiration latley so i figured if i want to write i should write about something...why not about how frustrating it is to not feel like writing lately...so thats what I did. I wanted the words To unravel upward In ribbons and curls Of cigarette smoke. Of snakes hovering, Charmed From the melodies in Cairo I wanted them to rise. I wanted them to sound The cry of a sad song One long note that grows louder and longer Growing sadder and sombre As each second passes. I wanted the words To echo in their ears. Linger in their hearts. Stay with them forever. But my lips go still. I hold my breath. They walk on past. The words are gone.
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lanaia74
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Post by lanaia74 on Nov 7, 2007 8:15:53 GMT -5
WOW! Mouth wide open! Speechless!
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Leash
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Post by Leash on Nov 8, 2007 0:55:38 GMT -5
Doesnt sound like writers block to me! I really enjoyed this piece, Goddess. I think its my favourite of yours so far.
Loved that! Beautiful wording.
Really shows your readers the mood/vibe of the poem. Sounds pretty out loud.
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zota666
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Post by zota666 on Nov 19, 2007 20:48:08 GMT -5
Really lack of inspiration it doesnt seem like that to me this is really good
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